Oh My Unicorn!

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Oh My Unicorn!

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Oh My Unicorn!
Genre: Romance | Otome | Political | Fantasy
CYOA-adaption


Writers:
Megumi
Mihwa

Coders:
Mihwa

Artists:
Megumi
Nessa (not on site)
Dawn (Not on site)

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None

Brief Summary:
Alyssia d'Camil, Unicorn Hunter extraordinaire. Or at least, she used to be until some flat-chested pretty girl turned her into a unicorn. Now Alyssia has to find a way to break the curse, not get killed herself, exact revenge, and fall in love?

...Really?

Good thing she regains human form during the night!

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The story is serious and comical. At the same exact time.

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Prologue:

The Holy Kingdom of Magnola has long enjoyed peace and prosperity—attributed greatly to the fact that it is the only nation on a far removed, lone continent. Far, far away from the tumultuous, warring Levanine Continent.

Or perhaps the affluence is ascribed to the long reign of Cerés Liev tyz Lahasrel and his Ceréssa?

Then again, the older folk would say that Magnola’s blessing is solely, unanimously, undeniably due to... unicorns. Or, more objectively put, on unicorn horns.

However, times have changed. Unicorn hunters emerged, and the pure beings—once revered above all else—were slain for profit.

Times have changed, and an era of peace is nearing its end. Magnola is long overdue for her share of woes. And as the saying goes:

"Laryl afréyt daedre fyt-eré."
Lessons are writ in blood.

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Anyway, If anyone wants to help out, it's greatly appreciated.

ATM, just the prologue is done. :'3 But majority of the script/events/scenes are all coming from this:
http://lunaescence.com/fics/viewstory.p ... arning=13+ (in which three chapters are done)
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Chapter One background.
Chapter One background.
Prologue background.
Prologue background.
Current title screen.
Current title screen.
Alyssia concept. Made with CAC.
Alyssia concept. Made with CAC.

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#2 Post by LVUER »

You draw all the BGs? If so then those are awesome!
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#3 Post by icebluehost »

LVUER wrote:You draw all the BGs? If so then those are awesome!
I agree! They're just...wow.

I look forward to this one! It has a very interesting plot.

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#4 Post by Mihwa »

LVUER wrote:You draw all the BGs? If so then those are awesome!
Oh, no, I didn't. I wish I did.
They were pictures/photos I found and modified.
Since, at the time, we had no artist.

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#5 Post by Megumi »

Yup. We mainly have artists for characters, none for background (unfortunately).

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You would just be surprised by the... well, the way I made Mihwa write the story with me XDDD

-whistles and poofs away-

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#6 Post by After All »

The only characters mentioned so far are both women. Is this going to be a GxG, or at least have GxG options?

If so, I am really enthusiastic about this game. Lemma needs more girl love :D

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#7 Post by Megumi »

-poofs-

Actually, for spoilers reasons, I cannot disclose much details but yeah, we may include some GxG actions... just because we find this funny xD.

However, we haven't reached that far in the writing process that's why I can't give you a definitive answer.

-poofs away-

(Please, do note that Megumi is French and therefore has a slightly off accentuation. T-T)
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#8 Post by Riviera »

I can get behind GxG. Hopefully there is some GxB too as well, but this looks promising either way. Will you need any help proofreading/editing later? I could help if you do.

This sounds interesting... unicorns are typically compared to pure-hearted, soft, sweet, gentle maidens.. and Alyssia has the look of a spunky, snarky hellcat. I wonder how many people she's going to surprise?
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#9 Post by Megumi »

*Magical appearance*

I think we wouldn't mind having some editors, proofreaders in our agenda. But we reaaaally need to write a lot more before reaching that stage.

As for GxG and GxB, this is mainly a GxB because... well, Mihwa and I are both romance writers (even though we don't mind occasional yuri stuff... in fact I was the one writing that scene -coughs-).

As for the unicorn thing... You don't want to know how this even began...

I actually believe the story itself would be slightly surprising. Mihwa and I actually... write completely different genre of stories. xD She's the serious writer, I'm the one adding some humour in it. (Hence Political + Humor) We give each other new pespectives on how the characters are (>_< me and my smartmouthed heroines) without hindering each other (thanks god, because that would make this impossible to do).

That's why I hope this will be a surprise for everybody that will actually play or read Oh My Unicorn! -winks-

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#10 Post by eightsnowflakes »

This sounds amazing.

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#11 Post by Celestie »

...you two. W.H.A.T?!

When did you decide this and why did you never mention it? *pouts at being left out*

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#12 Post by Megumi »

I fear I'm not understanding? -blinks-
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#13 Post by Celestie »

...D: what do you mean you don't understand, Me-chan?! *sad desu* *Celes retreats to the Corner of Woe*

On another note. The art is so pretty~ Maybe I missed your talk about it because Mi-cha and you are so fast in chatting and I tend to get lost when I join? xD Nah, but can't remember you mentioning anything of a VN....

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#14 Post by Megumi »

We actually decided about that a few days after the discussion with you. 'cept you weren't there.

But lately I can't get a hold on Mihwa... I wanted to show her my sketch design for Christian é_è
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#15 Post by Celestie »

Oh, damn. I fail.

Show meeeeeeee!!! Wait, who's Christian again?*shot* Uhm, drag her out and chain her up in your cupboard? What's her excuse? Call me curious but if my practically useless OC will appear in the story, will she also appear in this planned VN?
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