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YuukiCrossPudding
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#16 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

Sakura02 wrote:8) Yeah congrats :D don't forget to post some of your tablet pictures. :) if you can.
Sure, I will! But while handling the project of mine, I think I can't draw for these times.
I hope I could finish my writing soon, so I can try draw with the tablet.

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#17 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

I draw the girl, but the boxes is not mine.
it's kind of character for Deviantart.
for dothack the world group~
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#18 Post by Lumen_Astrum »

Nice drawing there. I love your style, but I think you should work on your anatomy. The arm is a bit too short (the whole arm should end before the knee) and the way you draw the hands (It looks a bit off). Aside from that, good job. ^^

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#19 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

Lumen_Astrum wrote:Nice drawing there. I love your style, but I think you should work on your anatomy. The arm is a bit too short (the whole arm should end before the knee) and the way you draw the hands (It looks a bit off). Aside from that, good job. ^^
Hyaa :oops: , drawing hands and the feet is my biggest weakness >.<
Usually I draw the arm too long (now it's too short!)
I'll try to do my best in learning how to draw hands more!
Thanks~ ^^

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#20 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

Another one!!!
Critics again please~
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#21 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

just random sketch
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#22 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

messy!!
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#23 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

Another one~
I'm in good mood today for drawing~
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#24 Post by SusanTheCat »

I really like this last one.

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#25 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

@susan : thanks! I hope I can do better next time!

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#26 Post by Julie »

Cute! :)

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#27 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

@julie: thanks!

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#28 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

z.png
I made that one for my VN sprite. But it's bad, so I fix it.
Into this:
kazu.png
This is the sprite for my VN project, how about it?
Please give some advice or critics^^
Maybe I can fix it more etc?
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#29 Post by Verity »

I think it might help if you slope the shoulders a little bit—generally they're not so much straight across, I think, and that'd make the poses look more natural. You could also move the eyes a little closer together—I think the rule of thumb might be one eye-width between them. That and I think generally male body types have a bit less hip to them. You're doing pretty good now, though.

Oh! One more thing I thought of—the drapery on the clothing looks a bit odd, I think because it's sort of sloping up whereas it should probably be curving down because of gravity. But really, it's improved a lot. I particularly like the hand, actually, which is pretty good because hands can be really hard.

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Re: My drawing and coloring, Crtic please!

#30 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

Verity wrote:I think it might help if you slope the shoulders a little bit—generally they're not so much straight across, I think, and that'd make the poses look more natural. You could also move the eyes a little closer together—I think the rule of thumb might be one eye-width between them. That and I think generally male body types have a bit less hip to them. You're doing pretty good now, though.

Oh! One more thing I thought of—the drapery on the clothing looks a bit odd, I think because it's sort of sloping up whereas it should probably be curving down because of gravity. But really, it's improved a lot. I particularly like the hand, actually, which is pretty good because hands can be really hard.
Thanks~ :)
I'll try to fix the places that you said~ :D

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