[WIP] The Last Order: Black Wings

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[WIP] The Last Order: Black Wings

#1 Post by Colby Alighieri » Sun Apr 10, 2011 6:59 am

I have all of my conceptualizing in scraps of paper, notebooks and quiz papers. So it's hard to encode them all or even find them! Haha! XD

EDITED AS OF NOVEMBER 20, 2011

Title: The Last Order: Black Wings
Genre: Supernatural, Mystery, BL
Game Rating: PG-13 to R-18. Mature Audiences appropriate.
Plot: Corvus wakes up in an abandoned, school Auditorium. That's pretty much about it... Only if he didn't wake up with his brains apparently bashed out and his limbs crushed finely. With nothing much to do, he goes around to try and solve the mystery of his own death. Unfortunately, he runs in to the company of a chatter-box ghost, a struggling journalist, a bleeding nurse and a chronically injured pizza boy. Well, he needs all the help he could get...

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Up next: Character Profiles!
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#2 Post by platonicheart » Sun Apr 10, 2011 9:07 am

Can I ask something??? Are the other characters alive??? or are they also ghosts???

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#3 Post by Abeiramar » Sun Apr 10, 2011 9:28 am

Interesting art-style! I will await for more info :lol: .

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#4 Post by SilverxBlue » Sun Apr 10, 2011 9:33 am

I like the BG and the dialogue box, it gives some sort of eerie feeling for the character.
Looks great so far, I'm keeping my eye on this project. :)
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#5 Post by Colby Alighieri » Sun Apr 10, 2011 10:51 am

platonicheart wrote:Can I ask something??? Are the other characters alive??? or are they also ghosts???
You have to wait for the Character Profiles next week ;)
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#6 Post by SusanTheCat » Sun Apr 10, 2011 12:33 pm

Looking forward to this!

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Re: [WIP] The Last Order: Black Wings

#7 Post by platonicheart » Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:43 am

Colby Alighieri wrote:
platonicheart wrote:Can I ask something??? Are the other characters alive??? or are they also ghosts???
You have to wait for the Character Profiles next week ;)
Argh...it makes me want to look forward to this more and more...:) Then, i'll be waiting! Goodluck...and oh by the way, if you need any help just pm me :)

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#8 Post by MiSi » Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:46 am

I like the art-style... and the story... aand just looking forward to play it ;)

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[WIP] The Last Order: Black Wings Character Profiles 1

#9 Post by Colby Alighieri » Mon Apr 11, 2011 11:05 am

EDITED AS OF JANUARY 1, 2012 DUE TO PLOT-RELATED REASONS

As promised: Character Profiles!

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Name: Knox Lois
Age: 35 years old
Gender: Male
Occupation: Cashier boy in a 24/7 Convenience Store; Night Shift
Description: A hapless, struggling-to-be-an-ordinary-man adopted by two friends who run a black-listed clinic. Unfortunately, his color-blindness and criminal record keeps him from being ordinary, not to mention his amnesia that started during his hearing and serving his 17 years of prison sentence. Strange that he's shy and withdrawn and would rather avoid conflicts than face them.

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Name: Corvus "Colby" Maro
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Occupation: Student (?)
Description: Just your average kid who doesn't like being in dark places and silent spots. He treasures Scruffy, his baby brother and the two are always together no matter where they go. But every now and then, sibling fights happen especially if it's about his relationship with Dylan Maro. Colby tries his best to even things out between his two brothers... Not that the other knows about the problem anyway.
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[WIP] The Last Order: Black Wings Character Profiles 2

#10 Post by Colby Alighieri » Tue Apr 12, 2011 9:42 am

EDITED AS OF JANUARY 1, 2012

Okay! Part 2!

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Name: Christopher Marsh
Age: 29 going 30
Gender: Male
Occupation: Fresh Lawyer, Works part-time in a pizza parlor
Description: An official lawyer, fresh from the oath taking. He had an above average grade and now that he's ready for work, he's still unsure if he could handle being a lawyer. So, he works as a waiter while contemplating about the way his life's going. But all of a sudden, his apartment's barged in by those pair of nurses charged of Illegal Settlement and Invalid Business Permit and demanded him to defend them. Although hesitant, he takes the case. The nurse had managed to talk him over to take it just for experience.


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Name: Lumina Clara
Age: Around 19-25
Gender: Female
Occupation: Doctor/Nurse (unlicensed)
Description: One of the pair of nurses that, for some reason, got herself involved with everyone else's problems. First of all, her clinic's been charged of Illegal Settlement and Invalid Business Permit. Second she, herself, has been charged of Involuntary Manslaughter and Negligence of Duty by a certain Mrs. Mitty. But it's like she doesn't care and tells everyone who she is. "Hello. I'm a doctor and I've been charged of illegal settlement, negligence and manslaughter. How may I help you?" Something like that. Anyway, she watches a lot of TV and had picked up a lot of details about life because of that late night show about a time-travelling detective. She's always ready to help... and deduce where you've come from by the mud on the soles of your shoes.


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Name: "Scruffy"
Age: Around 10-15... probably younger
Gender: Male
Occupation: Colby's baby brother
Description: Colby claims him to be his baby brother. Scruffy is your ordinary and typical baby brother; looks up to his older brother and always goes with him in his adventures or episodes of mischief. He's always ready to work with Colby... as long as it doesn't concern Dylan Maro, their new brother. He doesn't like him. Period.
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#11 Post by platonicheart » Wed Apr 13, 2011 8:38 am

Ooohh...I like the character summary so far! Can't wait to play with them!!!

BTW, If you're having difficulty with women reference, you could look or think about someone who has the same personality that you are imagining..get it? got it? hehe :)

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#12 Post by cdranger » Fri Apr 15, 2011 12:02 am

Weee! More character info! Keep it up Misciel! I can't wait to play this VN!

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#13 Post by Snowflower » Fri Apr 15, 2011 12:39 am

The coloring style you use is very different from what most people use here. I find that interesting.

& not to mention the plot line

I'll be watching this XD
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#14 Post by Colby Alighieri » Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:39 am

cdranger wrote:Weee! More character info! Keep it up Misciel! I can't wait to play this VN!

Remember that I will be one of your first Beta Testers! XD
... After I totally failed by spoiling my Beta Testers about the things in my VN? XD

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#15 Post by Colby Alighieri » Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:42 am

VN Update!

I've finished writing the script for Chapter 1 today! *rejoices for 5 minutes*

Now, I'm set to programming. (I can't wait for my new laptop! :D) This process might take a LONG while so expect any rare messages or contact from me from here on...

GOTTA GET WORKIN'!

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