project: Learning to love {UPDATE: VIEW 1ST PAGE}

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#106 Post by SmileyFace »

Okie Dokie.

So you mean something like this?
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#107 Post by platonicheart »

A little bit, but i personally think that iit would be better if you retain their original position and as for the expression of the girl (with the black vertical lines on the right side of her eye). Also, for the eyes of the characters, I recommend you make them just a white or black dot. Did you get what I mean??? :)

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#108 Post by SmileyFace »

I guess...

So basically you want me to make it that the cool guy is holding the girl's hip and the eyes to be just black dots? o_O;

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#109 Post by platonicheart »

Yes, I want you to retain that position. I've thought about it, so I've decided that I want the eyes to just be circle with now black shading :)

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#110 Post by SilverxBlue »

SmileyFace - I think, kinda like the eyes of the people on the pic on my signature is what platonicheart means.
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#111 Post by platonicheart »

SilverxBlue wrote:SmileyFace - I think, kinda like the eyes of the people on the pic on my signature is what platonicheart means.
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yes,yes, I was thinking about that, but then, I just stopped for a moment, gawk on the screen and thought maybe it would be better if it were just a white circle. Though it wouldn't hurt to hear your opinion, which would be better??? :)

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#112 Post by SilverxBlue »

Hmmm, I dunno, I think the black ones cause... I couldn't imagine the white ones *orz*. Maybe SmileyFace could give a better answer. :)
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#113 Post by SmileyFace »

Hmmm, I think black ones would be better.

Usually when I imagine white eyes I think of zombies... because I usually imagine that the person has no pupils. x___X;

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#114 Post by platonicheart »

Oh really?? Then, Majority wins! Black eyes will be! haha. Then, smileyface please use it for the eyes. :)

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#115 Post by platonicheart »

bump :)

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#116 Post by platonicheart »

This project is entering a two month hiatus until my artist comes back.

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