Idol Crush v1.1
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- SusanTheCat
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Re: Idol Crush v1.1
It mentions on the first page that the graphics came from Bass.
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Note on the Kanon music:
Last regrets during your first meeting with Jun is an accidental, to quote tv tropes, Fridge Logic. XD Except I don't think you need to go to the fridge to realize that when you've watched Kanon...
I just downloaded the game, got Kan's Neutral End...sadly. I think I'll like him the most.
Last regrets during your first meeting with Jun is an accidental, to quote tv tropes, Fridge Logic. XD Except I don't think you need to go to the fridge to realize that when you've watched Kanon...
I just downloaded the game, got Kan's Neutral End...sadly. I think I'll like him the most.
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again, where is the Linux release ?
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Not a bad game.
But the main menu is not so good.
I mean the buttons does not change color when the mouse pointer is over them.
But the main menu is not so good.
I mean the buttons does not change color when the mouse pointer is over them.
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It's not a BAD game...But it is pretty bland. Seems like a completely generic VN, almost to the point of looking like a parody. Your writing skills need some work...Otherwise, it was good.
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I'm downloading it now ^_^
I think I'll like Kan best. I always like the antisocial ones.
I think I'll like Kan best. I always like the antisocial ones.
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I don't think many people get this, but this was my first attempt at making a VN. Therefore, the story writing is not as good as what I'm capable of since I kind of got tired of the entire process months ago (due to the fact that I spent weeks trying to figure out the program on my own)
As for the menu, I didn't know about the hovering images when I released this game. Maybe, I will update this game in the future when I get the time? Hm... Maybe, if people wants it
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As for the menu, I didn't know about the hovering images when I released this game. Maybe, I will update this game in the future when I get the time? Hm... Maybe, if people wants it
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I thought it was a very good VN, especially since it's your first. I wish it had been longer cause I liked it ^_^
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I found this VN short and sweet; even though the plot was kind of generic, the art completely made up for it~
I have to say, I actually liked Jun's bad ending a lot, because it's not often that one of the obtainable boys turns out to be a jerk; It was really refreshing
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Seriously, this game looks very good. The art work is awsome. Why didn't I stumble upon this before???
*downloading*
*downloading*
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I kept getting bad or neutral endings >3> - it all ended so fast Q_Q
I did like how it all went together though =)
I did like how it all went together though =)
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I will say this: it's a good first shot at a VN. But there are plenty of room to improve on.
1. Your scripts are in dire need of a proofread. You're missing a lot of periods and some punctuations, so just keep this in mind if you plan to release a v1.2 in the future.
2. I would really love to see more character development. Declarations of love, kissing scenes, etc. all seem sort of abrupt in this VN.
3. Well, I guess the VN itself is too short. If you can fit good character development into that ~10 minutes of gameplay then I'd have no problem with it. But imho, you haven't been able to do that.
I understand that this is your first VN, and that this criticism is coming from someone who can't script to save her own life. But please take these into consideration, because I think the art is really pretty and it'd be a shame if it doesn't have a good script to go with, you know what I mean?
Sorry if I sounded harsh, I really am trying to be constructive. Good luck with this VN.
1. Your scripts are in dire need of a proofread. You're missing a lot of periods and some punctuations, so just keep this in mind if you plan to release a v1.2 in the future.
2. I would really love to see more character development. Declarations of love, kissing scenes, etc. all seem sort of abrupt in this VN.
3. Well, I guess the VN itself is too short. If you can fit good character development into that ~10 minutes of gameplay then I'd have no problem with it. But imho, you haven't been able to do that.
I understand that this is your first VN, and that this criticism is coming from someone who can't script to save her own life. But please take these into consideration, because I think the art is really pretty and it'd be a shame if it doesn't have a good script to go with, you know what I mean?
Sorry if I sounded harsh, I really am trying to be constructive. Good luck with this VN.
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Downloaded. I'll be sure to give you my opinion once I play the game through ^.^
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Im excited to play it XD
downloading now yey!
downloading now yey!
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I'm still waiting for a Linux or -all release....
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