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[Akwatyka]

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[afu]

I'm rather new to using renpy(so forgive me for not being able to give any advice or anything) but I think it looks good so far! ^^ I hope you'll translate it in english when you're done~

[Akwatyka]

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[x__sinister]

Your sketches look promising. (:
What you should do is post a brief paragraph about the plot of the game.
That will help generate more support/advice etc towards your game. (:

[lepapillonrouge]

Oh, please release it in French and English...I need some excuse to practice reading French.

My misleading screenname may cause people to think that I know how to read/speak the language XD

The backgrounds are so professional looking. I'm starting work on my first VN, but I know that the backgrounds are hard to plan out. How do you do it?

[Akwatyka]

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[Wintermoon]

I think you should know that there's already a manga/anime called すもももももも (literally "Plums and peaches too").

[dstarsboy]

Your sketches and backgrounds look excellent! Good luck to you. You should indicate your progress in:

Plot/Story:
Script:
Art:
Sound/Music:

Or whatever, and change it as you do updates to this thread, that way we can know when to expect something playable. I'm excited.

[Akwatyka]

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[Ramidel]

You mean the VN's gonna be a lemon? ::rimshot::

[x__sinister]

It might become Lemons, Peaches, and Plums.

This is seriously misleading!
If you decide to add a third girl, stick to the P theme and go for Pears, Peaches, and Plums.
This way, no one thinks you've got a naughty VN when you don't. XD

[sake-bento]

At least it's not Oranges, Lemons and Limes. XD

I don't think you should worry too much if the name is already "taken." Unless it's a blatant lift or something popular and unique (i.e. don't name it "Lord of the Rings"), it shouldn't be a huge problem.

[Akwatyka]

It might become Lemons, Peaches, and Plums.

This is seriously misleading!
If you decide to add a third girl, stick to the P theme and go for Pears, Peaches, and Plums.
This way, no one thinks you've got a naughty VN when you don't. XD

my bad, i had no idea what it stood for

[afu]

It's been a long while since I heard the term, but I think Lemons refers to ...smut/18+ scenarios ^^;;

[Ramidel]

Correct.