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#1 Post by Weakjounin »

This is a small idea I had while lying all over my table in class
Plot: The story of 3 individuals, each with their own uniqueness, interacting with each other and helping each other grow without realizing it.
Characters:
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I'm gonna clean the thread up later, fix things up, elaborate and stuff.
The art style of the VN is not gonna be the style I drew these portraits in.

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#2 Post by azureXtwilight »

I smell parody coming through! :D

*is interested*
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#3 Post by Weakjounin »

parody of what?
also: Alice has an obsession with clothes, so here's 6 of her 15 outfits:
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#4 Post by Zatch »

Lql Alice is so a fashion queen. xD I find this really amusing. I will watch this. GL! I do agree with azure, my parody sense are tingling!

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#5 Post by Weakjounin »

What parody? I'm so confused right now xD
can someone explain to me what I'm parodying?

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#6 Post by fleet »

My goodness, I see someone who thinks VN characters should wear different clothes during the course of a story! I salute you for thinking outside the box.
See subject topic.
http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... =4&t=11866

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Some of my visual novels are at http://www.the-new-lagoon.com. They are NSFW
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#7 Post by Weakjounin »

haha I just read the topic :D Yeah I like a little change in clothing, but I think I gave my self too much work. This is only 6 of Alice's 15 outfits. and I haven't even thought of pajamas and other stuff. oh well, I did the majority of this stuff in 1 day, so I can take my time and finish the rest
also, more clothes:
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#8 Post by vasudaprime »

Heh... I like the profile pictures you've posted for the characters in the opening post. It sort of feels like the vibe they're giving off is:

James - Anyone have a problem, Knight James is there to help!
Alice - Everything I want you will give to me. Now!
Charles - I live on planet Earth and I'm the only one with a grip on reality.

Anyway this sounds interesting. I'll be sure to keep an eye on it. Best of luck :).

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vasudaprime wrote:Heh... I like the profile pictures you've posted for the characters in the opening post. It sort of feels like the vibe they're giving off is:

James - Anyone have a problem, Knight James is there to help!
Alice - Everything I want you will give to me. Now!
Charles - I live on planet Earth and I'm the only one with a grip on reality.

Anyway this sounds interesting. I'll be sure to keep an eye on it. Best of luck :).
well if these are the vibes they're giving off, I feel like I've succeeded :D
thanks, I'm working hard on this, starting to work on Charles sprite base pose 1 and working on the script :D

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Hmm, interesting; knight, princess, and lonely dude -- hey, change of outfits :D!
Ohh, several changes of outfits :D!

HOLY CRAP 16 OUTFIT CHANGES :D!!!

I am officially stalking this >D.

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#11 Post by Weakjounin »

hehe I'm trying to make it good :D
here's some more stuff to show, I don't really like James' body, so I'm gonna fix that, but I really should study. I have exams in a few hours
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#12 Post by TsukiShima »

I love how colorful your arts is >u< They are so fun to see and I just feel so happy just by watching them. I hope you'll be able to finish this!

I'M TAKING CHARLES FOR MY FAV CHARA BECAUSE HE SEEMS SO DARK AND MACHO 8D

But may I say something? The shadow on Alice's face makes her seems slightly evil. It's looks fine on Charles because he himself is a dark figure. I suggest making it lesser or lighter, like on the picture on the first post.
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HanaMori wrote:I love how colorful your arts is >u< They are so fun to see and I just feel so happy just by watching them. I hope you'll be able to finish this!

I'M TAKING CHARLES FOR MY FAV CHARA BECAUSE HE SEEMS SO DARK AND MACHO 8D

But may I say something? The shadow on Alice's face makes her seems slightly evil. It's looks find on Charles because he himself is a dark figure. I suggest making it lesser or lighter, like on the picture on the first post.
You have just made my sunday so busy, I have to now replace 50 sprites xD
hehe I'm planning on finishing this, I'm clocking in at least 3 hours a day for the past 3 days and I have exams, so imagine how much work will get done when i'm on holiday :D

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#14 Post by TsukiShima »

Ack! xD It was just a suggestion, Weak ^^; You can go with these sprites, I don't mind because I'll still play it anyway. I hope you won't be to busy...

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#15 Post by Weakjounin »

hehe I'll stick with these sprites, but there's still tons of things to do :D
maybe I should study for my economics exam. or I should work on the coding a bit more now.......
or watch a movie. a movie sounds good :D
or I should work on Alice's clothes, there's still so many outfits to draw

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