The corrections are a big plus for me, though I don't expect more with the lenght of the next chapters, you gave me the motivation to study even more on english translation (I still slap myself for so much errors, more than one per line T_T).
Well, about the theme, I have a feeling for this "specie" because it was the theme of my very first novel long time ago, still an unfinished story but it was the trigger of my writing hobby.
This novel describe "my" version of this "monster", so don't worry about your, as it is going to be a bit different
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About the choice of four arms, yes, I am going that way, and I will show it in the chapter 2. Also I tend to consider the family specie more linked with the eagle than the bat.
I worked a bit on morphological and skeletal trait, maybe I will put the rough in a future bonus collection CG.
The main menu illustration give me a quite biaised opinion for me, because of the face which contrast with the rest, but I had to put it for the sake of the story.
Also I don't know if I must shrink the white shadow to be more like FF logo, the actual size is quite nice in proportion for the image.
Though that doesn't excuse my lazy wing drawing, I searched for a way to hide-then-show them in the body art, but I just ended like the 2-ways morning background (putting the character in the center ruined the shadow-like effect).
About the blinking effect, you totally nailed it, I was thinking of that since the beginning but I toyed too much and too early with pause that I got sick of it and forgot to work on it again.
The midi ressource is very interesting, I just hope that the permission request will be granted not too late
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Again, thank you very much for your advices, it make me want to do more than my best!