Witch Apprentice (Oct 31st update: Demo up on page 3)

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Re: Witch Apprentice (Oct 31st update: Demo up on page 3)

#76 Post by WickedRaccoon »

Cadenza wrote:I think it's important to remember that while the tan one may look better with Adriana's sprite, all characters + narration will also be occupying the textbox. Just a note c:
crap,i forgot about that.(oopsies ^^;;) thanks for the note
after the important reveal,i must say...i don't know which color is best now TT_TT

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#77 Post by Blane Doyle »

wakagana wrote:Almost makes me feel like you should feel guilty for clicking on it D;
It's doing it's job well then!

In all seriousness, I love what we see. It's not the full size so I am finding it hard to really get a good idea of what to give feedback on, though, except "looks really cool".

Why the white box lines, though?

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Re: Witch Apprentice (Oct 31st update: Demo up on page 3)

#78 Post by fioricca »

SUPER LATE COMMENT but I played the demo, and am absolutely in love with it! Adrian is so cute, haha. The music was also awesome, it captured the mood and setting well -- and I'm easily influenced by music, so the atmosphere settled in really quickly with me. The dialogue was also pleasant to read! Well done!

I don't know if you still need opinions on the dialogue box, but I personally prefer the tan to the black. I seem to be the minority here ^^; But I find dark text against a light background much easier to read compared to the reverse.

The title screen is FRICKING BADASS I love the logo, I love the atmosphere of everything. The squares are kind of weird, though. :Sa

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#79 Post by Minnfae »

Cool title screen!
I played the demo, and it was good, but I feel that it was too short to have much to comment on it.
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#80 Post by michi 18 »

When would be the full release?
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#81 Post by MioSegami »

Really good, so far I love th cat XD <3!! I'm looking foward to this! Plus the art is amazing ;)!
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#82 Post by vance »

so, is this game not coming out after all or what? Its been a week-ish and as far as i know there have been no updates from the producers since the supposed release-date. would be great to get some kind of update. Cheers.

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#83 Post by CheeryMoya »

vance wrote:so, is this game not coming out after all or what? Its been a week-ish and as far as i know there have been no updates from the producers since the supposed release-date. would be great to get some kind of update. Cheers.
Sorry for the lack of updates :C I signed myself up to help panda with coding the script, so I hope it's okay for me to say that both he and Razz have been busy lately. Yesterday he wrote a bit, but it's going to take longer than what he originally estimated. College and all, you know? I can't help him power through the script since I don't know what the plans for each route are and I can't do much to speed things up if I don't have material to code with. Please be patient with us ;n;

If it makes you feel better I added in some sound effects >_>

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#84 Post by vance »

Alright, im just glad to finally hear from you guys. Do you have a new ETA for the release? (too dumb to figure out how to properly 'Re' someone)

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#85 Post by Razz »

Yes sorry for the lack of updates. Ive been apprehensive about putting an actual release date since problems seem to spring up and extend it even further. I've sent Panda a message and I'll keep you posted once I get a reply on how things are going. >w<
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#86 Post by Aedin »

I don't know if anyone pointed it out or not, but in the demo when Adri is getting the map from Servant, Cassandra is explaining it to her even though she supposedly left the room.

Other than that, the demo was fine. It was cute and simple. I like Adri's personality. I never pictured Panties being that big though. Kind of took me by surprise.

I agree with everyone else: the new main menu looks awesome.
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#87 Post by redeyesblackpanda »

Alright, we've decided that it'd be best for me to withdraw as writer. I apologize for the delays up until now. IRL stuff has caused some trouble for me as of late, and as such, I've got to accept responsibility for that. I'm sorry for letting you all down this time. That being said, Razz is an amazing artist, Sam12 is an amazing composer, and it has been an honor and pleasure to be a part of this project. Knowing Razz, I'm confident that this project WILL see completion, so don't get too worried, guys. I've got the feeling that this has the makings of one of the better VNs that this community has seen a while.
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#88 Post by QofDust »

I just played the demo. So fun. I like the art, and the game's sense of humor. I can't wait to see this finished.
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#89 Post by Carrogath »

redeyesblackpanda wrote:Alright, we've decided that it'd be best for me to withdraw as writer. I apologize for the delays up until now. IRL stuff has caused some trouble for me as of late, and as such, I've got to accept responsibility for that. I'm sorry for letting you all down this time. That being said, Razz is an amazing artist, Sam12 is an amazing composer, and it has been an honor and pleasure to be a part of this project. Knowing Razz, I'm confident that this project WILL see completion, so don't get too worried, guys. I've got the feeling that this has the makings of one of the better VNs that this community has seen a while.
Who's the new writer?

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#90 Post by Razz »

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redeyesblackpanda wrote:Alright, we've decided that it'd be best for me to withdraw as writer. I apologize for the delays up until now. IRL stuff has caused some trouble for me as of late, and as such, I've got to accept responsibility for that. I'm sorry for letting you all down this time. That being said, Razz is an amazing artist, Sam12 is an amazing composer, and it has been an honor and pleasure to be a part of this project. Knowing Razz, I'm confident that this project WILL see completion, so don't get too worried, guys. I've got the feeling that this has the makings of one of the better VNs that this community has seen a while.
Who's the new writer?
Not sure yet! I'm putting up some ads about finding one, we're hopefully gonna find someone who can work off the original script to not delay the release a ton by reworking the entire script.
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