Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
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That was Beautiful!
Not to Mention, I cried like a Child.
Great Job!
Not to Mention, I cried like a Child.
Great Job!
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A lovely story... and I particularly liked the interface of the game and how you used images in it...
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That was a beautiful story and, like many before me, I cried.
You are very good at what you do, though it was a bit overbearing with how sweet it was. Although I kind of think it was better for it.
I don't really understand the end of Lawrence's storyline
You are very good at what you do, though it was a bit overbearing with how sweet it was. Although I kind of think it was better for it.
I don't really understand the end of Lawrence's storyline
Did he die too?
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The story's so beautiful.
If only every married couple are like that.
If only every married couple are like that.
^Impossible?
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I really love your game! It was the first game that made me cry The format of the game is really unique. I love how you use the wedding vows as the menu to the various chapters of their lives.
Thanks for making this game!
I love how you wrote the story starting from their childhood ( I have a soft spot for childhood friendship stories).
I think this kinetic novel is the most meaningful game I've played so far.
I liked the various lessons I could learn from the game.. lessons related to life, marriage, love, death, etc..
It was just so sweet and beautiful! And the music was nice too. After playing the game, I felt like I was in a trance. Thanks for making this game!
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Wow, it's been nearly two years since I came back to this forum. Thank you all for the lovely comments. I really appreciate it.
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Yes, he did... though I only implied it
Now to look around and see what's changed in the last two years...-Dizzy-
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This game was beautiful. :') I still have it on my laptop even though I finished it ages ago ^^
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It was a beautiful dream,,
And some memories pricked my eyes and there comes the tears,,
The tears wiped up and she wrote this,,
"Good work, i still like to read it sometimes.. "
And some memories pricked my eyes and there comes the tears,,
The tears wiped up and she wrote this,,
"Good work, i still like to read it sometimes.. "
Not enough time..
Or i'm a genius in wasting time..
Or i'm a genius in wasting time..
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Just found this; downloaded and played it - very nice, very moving!
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As I'm working on a VN about a newly married couple, I thought I'd play yours and see what your take on that idea was.
I loved how you followed the couple all through the years. Too many stories only tell about the falling-in-love part. And, yeah, even though a lot of parts felt a little sugary and expected, your details and the emotion in each scene touched me anyway. I really enjoyed it, thank you!
I loved how you followed the couple all through the years. Too many stories only tell about the falling-in-love part. And, yeah, even though a lot of parts felt a little sugary and expected, your details and the emotion in each scene touched me anyway. I really enjoyed it, thank you!
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I'm glad you enjoyed it! Hope all goes well with your VN too.
Cheers,
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Cheers,
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I love this also. One part in particular that really got to me was the "In sickness and in health" part:
Just contrasting the two different scenarios back-to-back--dealing with cancer in their senior years, and a simple fever in childhood. Just that contrast showing the dedication between the two across the years...can't quite describe why, but yeah, it got to me.
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Mentioned your VN on our gaming blog:
http://thepretentiousgamer.blogspot.com ... ovels.html
http://thepretentiousgamer.blogspot.com ... ovels.html
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Thank you! Glad for the notice.
Cheers,
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Cheers,
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Writer and director of Wedding Vows (finished 2009).
Creator of Lakeside Sunset (finished 2006).
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Writer and director of Wedding Vows (finished 2009).
Creator of Lakeside Sunset (finished 2006).
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