Hey ! Here I am again with some of my art, only this time with faces and slightly cell-shaded !
What I am interested is If I caught the light-source - which is front light - correctly and if there are major anatomical mistakes.
p.s: If the colors are weird, I apologize. Currently my screen does not display the color purple, green and yellow.
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- Cameron Light:
1) Since the light is frontal, the nose shadow should be differently positioned. Maybe around the dip between the eyebrows/eyes/nose bridge?
2) Because front light, his shirt seems strange. There should probably only be a dark shadow around the curve of his shoulders.
3) There would be a shadow underneath his necklace, but it shouldn't be a single straight line, since it makes his upper chest seem flat-ish, or strange. Think about what surfaces touch the string (no shadow/little shadow), and what surfaces don't and how far away they would be. As an example, think about his collarbone! Or, a single hill with a very long string hovering over it. How would you draw a shadow for that? Anatomy:
1) His right eye is smaller compared to his left. When at a 3/4th view, the eye just sorta curves around to the side of the face, or just shrinks width-wise. Look in the mirror and observe the farther eye!
2) His collarbone is too much to the side. Charlie's seems to be more correctly positioned.
- Charlie Light:
1) The way her hair is shaded makes it seem flat. Rather than just shading hair as lines, try to shade them as a smooth surface, like her face! It might help force you to think of hair as a shape too, and to make it more dimensional. Anatomy:
1) I-I know women's necks curve around that point, but I don't think they have pronounced Adam's apples?
- Eric Anatomy:
1) The eyes are too high up. Look at Charlie's and Cameron's faces--their eyes are around the halfway point of their skull, although Eric's isn't.
(Sorry, I don't have a functioning tablet at the moment, so I can't help you too much. Hope you manage to pull out a tip or two from my words.)
! Here I am again with some of my art, only this time with faces and slightly cell-shaded 
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