Editor/idea bouncer/etc for BxG slice of life/romance...

[desulishor]

I'm working on a conventional slice of life/romance VN with hints of fantasy and supernatural. Currently we're a team of a single writer, a musician, character artist and a BG artist.
For a short synopsis: "Kyle Nakano is a half-English boy starting his first year in Kakonomachi High. Average, despite his cynic sense of humor and a slight gift for telekinesis, he's still unaware that he's about to be confronted by three girls with abilities not too far from that of his own. However, the battlefield is not the one for psychic duels and secret organizations, but that of life, friendship and romance..."

I'm currently looking for an editor, who can go through my script, (hopefully on a regular basis til the project is finished rather than a single read) and give pointers both story-wise and in grammar/style. Even writing and idea bouncing are appreciated. A love for developing characters in a story is essential, and a good sense of humor and sarcasm is appreciated.
Currently, my script stands a little over 24 000 words with more coming, hopefully.

As of now, the position is still unpaid, but if the project does go commercial as planned, you'd have a share of the profits, even if that's just a promise at this point.

For a game I've completed earlier, check http://www.indiedb.com/games/project-dualis
Ask anything, or PM me for more info, if you're interested.

[ImmaDeker]

I sent you a PM because I'm the best and clearly the most qualified.

[desulishor]

Bumping the thread after an edit, still looking.