Status: Infected (KN)(Drama)(Short)

[Head_Phones]

1. Do you find the story interesting? Are you going to give this a chance once it's released?
The premise sounds incredibly interesting.

Also,

The art (flail)

2. "Memoir" is a crappy name for a virus/lol, some suggestions would be nice. (is this even a question?)
Hm, not good at these things.

How about:
-Some variation of 'Damnatio memoriae'? Or that can be what most people refer it to. Like Delirium has a couple different names for 'love'.

-http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_La ... ses_(full) I 'ctrl+F'-ed 'memory', and liked 'Damnatio memoriae' ^^

[khnachi]

Waah, thank you so much for taking the time to answer this.

The art (flail)

haha, thanks. whenever someone says this I can't help but put this gif up.

but thanks again, I'll do my best to make it as decent as possible

---updates:
I would like to ask if some of you are willing to give some feedbacks about the writings for this KN
this is a portion of the script:

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e"My name is Axel and I am eighteen years old."
e "I played soccer when I was in high school. Never was really good at it but that never stopped me from trying."
e "I like salty foods like french fries and potato chips. Anything with a nice kick to it, real classy dishes that are good for your body if you know what I mean."
e “I’m also fond of pop music. A pumping beat turned up to eleven gets me moving. Nothing beats it. Nothing tops it..." 
e "As I write my "top ten list' down in my battered notebook, I can’t stop myself from smiling."
e "I never thought I would be so happy remembering things that I once took for granted. Happy fleeting moments, little insignificant nothings really that mean so very much now that they are gone."
e “Erased. No more.”
e "Those simple experiences, tastes, sounds, feelings I never imagined would be of much relevance to me. So faint as if to be an illusion."
e "Now they've been so easily forgotten once It had taken over me..."
e "Even now it holds my memories hostage and I am helpless against It. The slow, inevitable corrosion of those precious moments."
e "I fear that I’ll forget that what makes me “me”. Never in a million years did think experiences which had been ingrained into my very essence, been my foundation, would one day fade away, become nothing."
 e "Until now."

do you like the style of writing?
is there something off about it?
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[Aruise]

Oh wow, I love the story! SO interesting! o//w//ob

Aaand your question:
1. Do you find the story interesting? Are you going to give this a chance once it's released?
YEESS YEEESS!! it's interesting and absolutely my favorite genre! XDD, I'm curious what will happen to Axel since he's "infected".
and of course I'll play it, so good luck to finish it! XD

2. "Memoir" is a crappy name for a virus/lol, some suggestions would be nice. (is this even a question?)
Well, it's pretty normal for me :3

3. Do you like the style of writing?
is there something off about it?
No, I'm very like it, somehow it's full of emotions.


I'll stalk keep my eyes on this, it's great so far especially dat art, so beautiful and soooo eye-catching! XDD

[Hazel-Bun]

Woah look at them mistakes-- I'll fix those later, thanks for posting khnachi ;o;b

[khnachi]

I'm alive!
As for updates
-I have updated the first post you might to check that out
-GUI design is done!
-Check out the game's site http://www.status-infected.blue-tsuki.com/