DENEB - Songs of the Summer Triangle *05.12.08*

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#16 Post by bloodywyvern »

Ah very nice :D those old boats are always so funny looking yet their designs are amazing. The character was very well done as well.
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#17 Post by sake-bento »

The art is very nice. @_@ I'm especially liking the boat. Since scenery and stuff like that is a huge weakness for me, I'm always really inspired by people who can draw it so well.

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#18 Post by Blue123 »

I agree. The character art looks very nice.

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#19 Post by excellentcoffee »

It's been said a million times, but your art is brilliant. Particularly like this piece.

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#20 Post by risingbamboobanana »

thank you so much for all the feedback! =3 didn't draw much lately, mostly writing. did a few quick sketches though (nothing spectacular)

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#21 Post by risingbamboobanana »

ack! so sorry! i don't mean to bump/double post, but i added a poll. i know it's still quite early to be asking this, but i'd like to see what you guys think. i'm open to suggestions, but what out of the three shot sizes (yeah, i keep thinking in terms of movie shots...ignore that) would you like to see the most? i myself am leaning towards full-bodied sprites. i mean, i can always crop them, and if i'm gonna draw more than just the head, i might as well do the whole thing.

so er...vote away! :mrgreen:
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#22 Post by Nessiah »

Medium Imo, as long as you can recognize the characters, you don't need to go on to much quality.
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#23 Post by Deji »

I vote medium =P
You could always make big images for the sprites, so you can shrink them down for the medium size and cut them at shoulder/chest level to make the headshots for close-up moments =P
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#24 Post by risingbamboobanana »

^kay, thanks for voting! :) i'll leave the poll open, just for shizzles i guess :mrgreen:

going for a new look for the whole project. gonna re-do ALLLLLLLLLL of the art. whoopee. actually, i think it'll be pretty fun :D

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#25 Post by bloodywyvern »

Wow that's quite the task redoing it all, hope it all turns out even better because of it :D Looking great so far.
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#26 Post by Sakurazaki »

Awesome. :P Remember to gimme some new script to edit once in a while :D
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#27 Post by risingbamboobanana »

*ka-bump of shamelessness*

just wanna say that i'm alive. and that so is Deneb 8)

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i'm thinking of doing at least one full bodied-sprite for each character (B&W), and a collection of different headshot sprites (in colour) with different expressions for the dialogue. a bit similar to what they did in Red Shift, methinks. the layout'll be a bit different, of course. but then again, i'm willing to make compromises if i need to, so if i decide to switch to a medium shot sprite, i'll just crop them.

have made close to no progress all of this month in the actual writing of the script. i do, however, have COMPLETELY (pretty much) planned more detailed aspects of the storyline as of today! :O before i was just going in this general direction when i was writing the first few parts. so hooray.
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Re: DENEB - Songs of the Summer Triangle *UPDATED 04.07.08*

#28 Post by Samu-kun »

That's an amazing drawing. Seriously looks awsome. ^_^

...Although I wonder if the ladies might like it more than me. XD

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Re: DENEB - Songs of the Summer Triangle *UPDATED 04.07.08*

#29 Post by renkenjutsu »

WOW! Your art is simply awesome! And this is going to be game sprites? Way cool! :)
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Re: DENEB - Songs of the Summer Triangle *UPDATED 04.07.08*

#30 Post by risingbamboobanana »

@Samu-kun: haha thank you XD i thought this design was rather toned down compared to some of the others i had (he's a middle-aged father of three! :o) but in that case, i promise the next update will include some estrogen :mrgreen:

@renkenjutsu: thanks for your support! hope the rest of my stuff measures up X)
A little birdy in the sky
Dropped a poopie in my eye
I did not scream, I did not cry
But thanked the Lord that cows don't fly!

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