Story follows Lumen, A witch that not long ago come into Astral. But despite being in Astral, Lumen not only can't remember anything about the outside world in witch she was before she come to Astral, she is also terrible at magic to the point most question if she should even be in Astral in the first place. But despite that Lumen isn't giving up, she is determine to continue advancing and to uncover her past.
Route separation works in a classical VN way. Common route>Choice>Heroine route
Length: around 140k-150k words
20+ CGs
Fully GxG (AKA Girls love only). All characters are girls and all girls are interested in other girls.
Age: Appears as 15
Specialization: None
Main Element: Water
Secondary Element: Fire
Height: 164cm
History: While it has been some time since she come to Astral she still can't remember anything from her past
lives and she can't get a hang of even basic magic, to the point some wonder if she is really worthy of being in Astral.
Because of this Lumen lucks confidence and has become a lot quieter then she used to be.
Most other people in Astral don't pay her much attention but there are several exceptions, her best friend
Iori that is always trying to cheer her up, her other friend and Iori's Girlfriend Nene, and also for some reason
an elite witch of their grade Diane that is trying to help Lumen from time to time. While Lumen is grateful for it she
also worries about why would someone like her pay her attention. There is also a mysterious half cat Mao that speaks to her
sometimes.
Personality: While she used to be a very positive and optimistic person her constant failures since coming
in Astral have changed her and made her more quiet and shy, whoever sometimes when spending times
with friends her optimistic side still shows up. Still not the one for giving up and is trying hard
to improve, true she (unsuccessfully) tries to hide it in order not to worry her friends as she often pushes herself
past her own limits. She is very emotional and caring and likes to help others if she can.
Age: Appears as 16
Specialization: Mind Manipulation Witchcraft, Wast knowledge of different witchcraft
Main Element: Earth
Secondary Element: Water
Height: 178cm
History: Despite being reincarnated in Astral only 8 years ago and starting with academy of witchcraft only 6 years
ago she is already close to passing into second grade witch is why she is considered a genius by many as well as
a rule model and sort of an idol to other girls. While she is happy to give some attention to her fans she
didn't make any close ties since coming in Astral, she does whoever for some reason show special interest
in Lumen. While some think she is only trying to help her as part of her serous personality her
real motivation is unknown.
Personality: Highly composed and intelligent, A serous type that spends most of her time staying witchcraft
and advancing. She can be very strict with others but also has a gentler side to her. She takes a lot of pride
in her knowledge and hates to lose.
Name: Iori
Age: Appears as 15
Specialization: Enchantment
Main Element: Wind
Secondary Element: Fire
Height: 168cm
History: She come in Astral around the same time as Lumen. Iori befriended Lumen
very soon after Lumen come into astral and has been her best friend since then. She is average in witchcraft.
Personality: Cheerful, easygoing, friendly and tomboyish. She likes to be in groups and have fun. At first look
it doesn't seem like there is much to be said about her, but she cares about her friends more then she let's on
and isn't as simpleminded as she appears.
Name: Nene
Age: Appears as 15
Specialization: Environment Control
Main Element: Wind
Secondary Element: Earth
Height: 162cm
History: Nene has come in Astral around the same time as Iori, she is her girlfriend and Lumen's friend.
Personality: Similar to Iori, Nene is cheerfuller, easygoing and friendly but unlike Iori she is quite girlish.
Nene enjoys teasing people and quite often ends up overdoing it. Despite this she can be very easily embarrassed when someone
turns teasing on her.
Name: Rie
Age: Appears as 16
Specialization: Astrological Witchcraft
Main Element: Earth
Secondary Element: Fire
Height: 173cm
History: Rie and her younger twin sister Rena come directly into Astral from outside world, because of this she has
a lot more vivid memories of outside world then the rest of Astral's residents witch resulted in her luck of trust toward anyone other then her sister.
Personality: Cold and Composed, others see her as cool and a bit mysterious, likes to stick to herself and doesn't
often show emotions but can get very passionate from time to time, especially when it comes to her younger
twin sister.
Name: Rena
Age: Appears as 16
Specialization: Ex Astral projection, current Life and creation Witchcraft
Main Element: Wind
Secondary Element: Water
Height: 173cm
History: Rena and her older twin sister Rie come directly into Astral from outside world, because of this she has
a lot more vivid memories of outside world then the rest of Astral's residents but unlike her sister she
displays this by seeking reassurance from others that they are really done with the outside world and is trying
her hardest to forget and put outside world behind her, true memories of outside world still hunt her.
Personality: Unlike her older twin sister Rie, Rena is a cheerful and friendly girl that always has a smile on
her face. She likes beautiful and romantic things and is always up for spending emotional, intimate and sweet
moments with her friends. She secretly has a complex as she thinks she isn't as strong as her older twin and always
has to rely on other people for everything, true nobody else sees her that way and she is in fact very capable
herself.
Name: Honoko
Age: Appears as 12
Specialization: ???
Main Element: None
Secondary Element: None
Height: Around 120cm
History: Honoko is a fire elemental.
Personality: She is very sweet and caring and can be very playful. While at times she appears to be very innocent
as her apprentice would suggest she can also be extremely merciless at other times, especially if anyone tries to harm
her master.
Side Characters
Name: Mao
Age: Appears as 18
Specialization: Absolute Control
Main Element: Wind
Secondary Element: Fire
Height: 170cm
History: Mao is a mysterious half cat that sometimes appears before Lumen and talks to her.
Personality: Mao is cheerful and flirty, she is very true to her half cat apprentice and has a very cat-like personality
and tends to do whatever she likes.
Name: Liane
Age: Appears as 18
Specialization: Defensive Magic
Main Element: Earth
Secondary Element: Water
Height: 171cm
Personality: Calm, Patient, Kind and Mature.
Name: High Priestess Lira
Age: Appears as 23
Specialization: All Seeing Eye
Main Element: ???
Secondary Element: ???
Height: 172cm
History: Lira is one of witches that stayed in Astral after finishing all grades of Astral in order to help teach those who come in
Astral. Other then that noting is known about her.
Personality: Highly serious "Business only" person. Never shoves emotions and doesn't talk about anything other then
magic/spirituality studies. Doesn't make any personal connections.
Screenshots
Progress
Writing: 70%
Art: Characters-100% BGs-99% CGs-10%
Q&A
#1) When is VN going to be released?
In best case scenario It could be done around end of September, in worst case scenario Q1 2019
#2) Is it free?
As much as I would love to give VNs for free, if I want to continue making VNs full time (Witch I do) I have to make money from it so I can continue to do so.
#3) How much is it going to cost?
I am thinking of 5.99$
#4) Is there nudity/H-scenes etc.
No.
Questions
#1) What are your general thoughts about this VN?
#2) What about this VN seems most interesting to you?
#3) Based on what you know about it so far, would you be interested in buying it?
#4) Do you think that 5.99$ is appropriate price for this VN based on what you know about it?
#5) Do you have any other questions?