Right now, I'm writing a scene at a train station, but I don't know what words I should use to describe some few things. So.. I guess there's a few questions: (NEW QUESTIONS)
- I'm not sure of what it is call, urban, village, city? The setting takes place in a place that less people live, since most have move out, but there are line for connections, small grocery shops, and every needs.
- How to describe the silentness of that place? Lonely?
Edit : I used some of the techniques I've gained and rewrite them all for the previous questions, but I'm still not sure if it's good enough. I haven't finish on telling about the train coming to the station. Can you read it and check for me if there's something missing? And how do you think I can make the first part longer? >__< That part is trying to describe Autumn, but other than the leaves, I'm not sure what other I can put.
I'm also very sorry if you think I'm still not improving even after the facts you shared with me >___<|||The leaves are dancing, following the sway of the gentle wind. Red bed of leaves covering the ground, as if it was glowing. Indeed, it is a peaceful season of the year, a little chilly, but it doesn't stop the joy of a young man, who welcomes autumn openly.
The silence at the train station is as usual, and even quieter since less people are around anymore. Some with newspapers on hands, while some are busy checking their phones. A small family are having a small chit chat with one another. All of them are playing in their own mind while waiting for the next train to come. How long will that be?
The clock ticks, the hands are pointing at 7 and 10. Ah, it must 7.50 am, that means the train would be here soon.
Not long after that the rumbling noise can be heard from afar, changing the green light into red. The future passengers quickly gather their belonging as the sound gets closer and louder. Everyone stands up and gets closer to the platform, waiting for their ride to arrive.
There it is, sharp at 8 o'clock, the train arrive in time.
Also, if possible, can anyone tell me more about Autumn? I feel so helpless now.. (´・ω・)