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Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)
I really enjoyed playing your first fantasia game! It was sooo cute and very original. And as for the demon.. Valen is really cute! I love her personality ^-^ After playing your games it inspired me to make one of my own so Thank you! And good luck with everything xD
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Arasettie + Atticus= Attisettie
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Christopher+ Elaine= Christaine
Atticus+ Vanessa= Attissa
Emile+ Arasettie= Emisettie
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Thank you for the support! I promise that I won't abandon this project! Just pray so that I'll be accepted at UGM Medical facculty and I'll continue the project real soon! :p
Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)
Mmm, I played it quite a time ago, and I enjoyed it a lot. I also played the original game a while ago, just as good. I love Volg, huuu. And I guess I'm about the only person who's not obsessing over Cain? Haha! I also love Nazim.
As for the character death - definitly go for it. Stories can't always be 100% happy-go-lucky stuff, because that's boring. A death of a character adds a lot to the story, that is if written properly. Emotion, the death itself and feelings afterwards - all of this would need to be written in detail and with care for it to be successful, but I think you can take it on you, Azure!
But, you could do it a certain way. Say, if you're on the character-to-die root (Let's just call them 'D' for short, aye?), he wouldn't or would die, depending on the situation it's supposed to be, and the opposite - if you're not on D's root, he would or wouldn't die. Makes sense, I hope? There could be multiple roots too, say, if you're nice/not nice to D, but are not on his root, he'll die/not die, or if you're on D's friends root, again, he might or might not die. I know it sounds a bit confusing, but I think you know what I mean. Either way, go for it!
Last but not least, I do hope you'll be accepted, and good luck with everything!
As for the character death - definitly go for it. Stories can't always be 100% happy-go-lucky stuff, because that's boring. A death of a character adds a lot to the story, that is if written properly. Emotion, the death itself and feelings afterwards - all of this would need to be written in detail and with care for it to be successful, but I think you can take it on you, Azure!
But, you could do it a certain way. Say, if you're on the character-to-die root (Let's just call them 'D' for short, aye?), he wouldn't or would die, depending on the situation it's supposed to be, and the opposite - if you're not on D's root, he would or wouldn't die. Makes sense, I hope? There could be multiple roots too, say, if you're nice/not nice to D, but are not on his root, he'll die/not die, or if you're on D's friends root, again, he might or might not die. I know it sounds a bit confusing, but I think you know what I mean. Either way, go for it!
Last but not least, I do hope you'll be accepted, and good luck with everything!
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Yeah, I'm planning that as well! You seem to have read my mind. Thank you for the support!Vynuxys wrote: But, you could do it a certain way. Say, if you're on the character-to-die root (Let's just call them 'D' for short, aye?), he wouldn't or would die, depending u're not on D's root, he would or wouldn't die. Makes sense, I hope? There could be multiple roots too, say, if you're nice/not nice to D, but are not on his root, he'll die/not die, or if you're on D's friends root, again, he might or might not die. I know it sounds a bit confusing, but I think you know what I mean. Either way, go for it!
Last but not least, I do hope you'll be accepted, and good luck with everything!
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Wow, best of luck!azureXtwilight wrote:Thank you for the support! I promise that I won't abandon this project! Just pray so that I'll be accepted at UGM Medical facculty and I'll continue the project real soon! :p
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You are the culprit. Ushiromiya Natsuhi-san.azureXtwilight wrote:
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I'm back!
I'm already accepted in the medical faculty, so now all that's left is continuing the game!
I'm already accepted in the medical faculty, so now all that's left is continuing the game!
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Umineko XD XD
That's great for you azure!
That's great for you azure!
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haha loled with the umineko pic XD ERIKA FTW. as you can see, im an UMINEKO FAN XP. btw great news azureXtwilight
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I'm really looking forward to this! =D (Like, the checkinghereeverydaytoseehowit'sgoing looking foward to this. xD)
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Great news! =D I can't wait for the game ^^
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Let's see, maybe I'll get Cain's arc completed next week. Anyone wants to proofread?
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I 'd like to help you azurextwilight!!!
I think my english is not bad, so if you want i can help you anytime!
Please pick me!!
I think my english is not bad, so if you want i can help you anytime!
Please pick me!!
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Well, I'd be honored to - I'm not an original English speaker, but I'm learning English for 8 years and I will probably focus on it in college (I go to something like a language-grammary school), and it could be a really great practice for me =D If you want to, of course. Plus, I have some free time these days =)
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Alright, while I can tell that your fans are more than just a little eager to help you out with proofreading, I'm willing to offer my help as well. I'll be very thorough, but I promise not to be mean about it. damned people who call themselves harsh critics and just use it as an excuse to flaunt their egos... I'll look over sentence structure, effectiveness of dialogue, and story structure, as well as the basic spell checking that people usually expect. I'll also be quick about it, because I have no life to get in the way.
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